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Tumblr Tuesday – 10/08/13
Posted by kjohnson1585 in Animation, Comics, Film, Writing on October 8, 2013
Welcome back to Tumblr Tuesday! Unfortunately, not much has been going on in the Tumblr-verse:
— What the fox says is important, but I’m more intrigued by the stop-motion movement of the mouth (Fantastic Mr. Fox is a pretty great film):
http://totalmediabridge.tumblr.com/post/62922379563/weeping-angels-take-the-ponds-shloobykitten
— Differentiating between three Asian written languages:
http://totalmediabridge.tumblr.com/post/62966585522/theromanticanon-harmoniousalgorithm-this-is
— And some really damn good duck art in sketch form:
http://totalmediabridge.tumblr.com/post/63000092399/monstrous-turtles-imaginashon-a-sketch-i-did
Gargoyles – “The Mirror/The Silver Falcon”
Posted by kjohnson1585 in Animation, Television, Writing on October 7, 2013
With Gargoyles building up its mythology so much yet failing to do anything significant with it, the show seems caught in a bevy of rising action decisions, constantly climbing the ladder of tension but uncomfortable with making it mean anything. According to Greg Weisman’s tweets, it seems to be his writing style – to always build towards something. At times, though, you have to show us that “something,” or audiences feel like they’re stuck in a holding pattern, that the writers are ostensibly stalling for time and paychecks.
“The Mirror” and “The Silver Falcon” doesn’t give us the kind of relief that one would expect after all the narrative build up – in fact, it even adds more to the possibilities of future conflicts. But what these episodes do is ease up on their overall connection to the broad mythology, using two MacGuffins to essentially create two one-offs that work well enough on their own. They use past enemies – Demona and Dracon – but given they have clear, direct motivations and not nebulous, nefarious ones, these episodes are given the breathing room to tell a full story, with a clear beginning, middle, and end. It also adds a much needed sense of humor to the show, a slightly goofy sensibility that even Shakespeare utilized, making “The Mirror” and “The Silver Falcon” two of the best episodes of second season so far.
Demona is a much better villain than Xanatos. She has a specific grudge against Goliath and all of humanity. She’s desperate that borders on crazy, but crafty enough to 1) survive for so long and 2) hatch devious plans herself. There is still a long, painful backstory hidden in Demona’s past, intriguingly touched upon when we get a glimpse of what appears to be her house, which raises all sorts of questions, of the good kind. I’m confident in time we’ll learn all about it. Right now, we’re focused on another one of her magic-based plan, and boy, it’s a doozy.
“The Mirror” starts of kinda sketchy. Demona sneaks into a museum to steal a mirror, but randomly, Elisa and Goliath are there waiting. The episode doesn’t explain why they’re there, nor does it explain why Elisa is wearing glasses and has her hair up. It seems like they were lying in wait, in disguise, but why? It’s not like they had intel on the robbery. Luckily this is a minor flaw, as there’s a pretty awesome chase sequence before Demona flies away. The significant thing is in the ensuing chaos, two robbers sneak in and actually steal the mirror, delivering it later to a mysterious house. Demona, apparently, has been doling out cash in secret to acquire certain services while hiding in her rather lavish home. How’d she get this? I love that this mystery is set up here.
The mirror is magic, and Demona uses it to summon a dark elf named Puck. There are some nifty ideas here – Demona pre-chained the mirror, so upon Puck’s arrival, he’d be immediately trapped. Demona is many things, but she’s no fool. What she is, however, is desperate, and she approaches Puck, an elven personification of the Monkey’s Paw, with a wish to rid Goliath of his human compatriot, Elisa. Well, you know how mischievous beings treat wishes, being all “ironic” with them. Puck turns Elisa into a gargoyle! BOOM! Human Elisa is no more!
What I like about “The Mirror” is that from this point on, the episode has fun with its surreal premise. Puck, as an instrument of chaos, allows the writers to play around with designs and set ups, where future wishes end up turning all of Manhattan’s populous into gargoyles and Goliath’s gang into humans. It’s a real treat, and the combined efforts of Jade and Nakamura Animation Studios adds a visual panache to the whole thing, making the changes both amusing and organic. Everything looks polished, and the variations of the gargoyle designs and colors add to the makeshift world. Even the little gargoyle-kid in the screencap above is perfect.
There are a few minor things that didn’t work. One was the odd attempt to build at a tentative love story between Goliath and gargoyle-Elisa. This fell flat. Even in gargoyle form, Elisa and Goliath are always and forever platonic, and implying that in a different form there could be a “spark” reeks of early 90s fanfiction. I did like the mental games the episode played, where when people transformed, they literally thought they were normal and everyone ELSE had changed. It was a fun bit of disorientation although I don’t think it went anywhere. Also, there’s a fight in what looks like Rockefeller Center where human-Goliath crashes into a shop window where – surprise surprise! – there’s battle armaments. Swords, maces, shields, and axes. It’s all there mostly so Puck can fuck with them and turn the weapons against people. It’s a heck of a sequences despite it making little sense.
But there’s a lot of fun to be had. The gargoyles running from the humans is a great subversion, which is even subverted further when a couple of “brave” gargoyles chase after the humanized-gargoyles for attacking Demona, only to be chased off when the humanized-gargoyles act all tough. Puck has a lot of surreal fun, even changing Bronx into a blue dog, although to his admission, “It should have been a chihuahua.” I like Puck’s trolling and his general devil-may-care attitude, giving a levity to the show that Gargoyles definitely needs. The episode even references its Shakespeare origins here! A wee bit of old-school, classic Comedy does Gargoyles some good, even if catching Puck in a trash can is kinda lame.
The episode ends when Puck agrees to transform everyone back to normal in exchange for his freedom. I was quite surprised when Puck escaped, he took the captured Demona with him – but that was for more trolling (with a side of revenge). When Demona insults him, he gives the female gargoyle a blessing and a curse: she won’t be stone in the daylight; instead, she shall be human. Knowing how much Demona detests the human race, becoming her enemy might quite possibly be a fate worse than death. “The Mirror” is such a fun, exciting episode: things seem to be moving in the show’s favor.
That goes double for “The Silver Falcon,” an episode where the writers kinda say fuck it and posits the Gargoyles world as a film noir. I didn’t expect it to work, but with the emerging badassery of Broadway and some good ol’ crazy Bluestone, “The Silver Falcon” has some wacky fun and couples its twist-heavy storyline in typical noir fashion. I would be okay with some more Elisa/Broadway team-ups, especially if they emphasize the more seedy underbelly of the Gargoyles vision of New York.
A curious Bluestone walks into Dracon’s midst, an image that begins the episode as it cuts to Elisa’s apartment. There’s some really great visual, subtle work here. Elisa locked her gun in a safe now, and she’s causally reluctant to let Broadway follow her on her search for the now-missing Bluestone, since, you know, he once shot her. It’s a concept that overshadows the episode; kudos to the writers for not throwing it into the viewers faces. Broadway is intrigued by the black-and-white detective shows on TV, and he champs at the bit to reenact it. Elisa, wisely, tells the gargoyle to stand down, but Broadway, unwisely, goes against her wishes and follows her to Bluestones apartment, in trenchcoat and hat. The “serious” Gargoyles would have me question how and where Broadway came across such an attire. The “lighter” Gargoyles allow such choices to go unanswered, allowing the audience to simply sit back, relax, and enjoy the ride.
Broadway does manage to save Elisa from a mysterious assailant inside Bluestone’s apartment, allowing Elisa to give him a bit more leeway. They indeed team up, following a couple a clues to Cleopatra’s Needle, which is slowly becoming an intriguing place in the Gargoyle universe – it was in the previous episode as well. Elisa, and by proxy the audience, learns from an FBI informant named Hacker about Bluestone’s history – he used to work for the FBI but was booted off due to his obsession with the Illuminati, and his disappearance may have to do with yet another crazy Illuminati goose chase. Hacker hands Elisa a letter written by an old gangster named Mace Malone to a a mysterious “DD”. The mysteries continue to pile up, and for a moment, it does seem like the Illuminati ARE involved, when a couple of thugs arrive to take the detective out.
It’s an brief but awesome fight, with Broadway arriving and showcasing once again how awesome he’s gotten in the second season. The animation continues to be impressive, with the expressions being the definite highlights. The note leads them to an office, where they meet am old man named Benton, who then leads them the Silver Falcon Nightclub. Mysteriously, the gangsters already there were ready for them – an explosion traps them under some rubble, and even worse, Broadway turns into stone.
I’m actually disappointed by the intro. By introducing Bluestone’s capture by Dracon early, we already know that the Illuminati isn’t involved. It would be cool if they added a bit of paranoia to the mix. But we know what Elisa and Bluestone learn at the moment – the Illuminati chase was really a bunch of clues leading to some missing diamonds stolen by Mace and “DD”. The safe reveals no diamonds; simply a note written by Mace trolling his former “DD” friend. Elisa does some quick thinking, leading the gangsters away for the day so Broadway can transform, and lookie here! Broadway is reading. He’s a fast learner too, using the discarded note to track Elisa down.
I really like this scene. Elisa, Bluestone, and Broadway do some pretty great, quick-thinking moves to outwit Dracon and his men, and Broadway gets to emulate the film noir scene he watched earlier. I’d like to think he just tracked Dracon down for miles until he saw an opportunity to do it, which kinda makes him even awesomer. The final twist to all this? Benton arrives, upon which Elisa deduces that he was the actual “DD” – Dominic Dracon. More quick thinking traps Dominic with another red herring, since Mace fools his former partner from the grave once again. (Mace, the original troll?) Anyway, the lighting, shading, and wind effects make the visuals on the “real” silver falcon statute a particular highlight of the episode, and with a rich, fun mystery serving as the backbone to the story, “The Silver Falcon,” makes it a hell of an enjoyable ride.
“The Mirror” and “The Silver Falcon” suggests strongly that by loosening up the show and playing around with the genre, Gargoyles may be better served by stepping away from it’s building mythology and tell more unique, one-off stories. I’m still curious about the ultimate stories that the show want to tell, but the wheel spinning and its self-designated overuse of the Xanatos-Gambit make those conflicts more frustrating. These are the kinds of stories that Gargoyles need to tell. Hopefully they’ll be more.
“The Mirror” B+/”The Silver Falcon” B+
Breaking Bad, Arthur Miller, and the New American Tragedy
Posted by kjohnson1585 in Comics, Television, Uncategorized, Writing on October 2, 2013
It was in “To’hajiilee” when it all clicked. For me, anyway. Walter White had just just been handcuffed, finally, after so many months of his infamy and actions wrecking havoc not just in Albuquerque, but pretty much all over the Southwest. He is brought face-to-face with Jesse Pinkman, the kid who just played the manipulation game like the adults around him, and managed to win. He stares at Jessie and calls him a “coward.” How does Jesse respond? He spits in Walt’s face. The two immediately starts to rough each other up much as they can while Hank and Gomez barely restrain them. The final season of AMC’s titular show has been about many things, but in particular about how lies, deceit, paranoia, and manipulation can be, and will be, exposed, and the full, painful consequences of these revelations. The sad truth is that it ends up being pure violence, as distinctly portrayed in those horrifying final five minutes before the episode cut to black. You can’t lie around a punch in the face or a massive shootout.
That mini dust-up, though, reminded me of a moment in Arthur Miller’s tragic American play, A View from the Bridge. It was the spit in particular, for in the play, a confused and desperate Eddie Carbone, genuinely concerned for the well-being of his daughter (but deep down, more concerned about his sense of masculinity), calls immigration to stop his daughter from marrying the “dancing European” Rodolpho, an act of betrayal that enrages Marco, Rodolpho’s brother and protector. In a tense scene, Marco spits into Eddie’s face, and the two indeed have their own mini dust-up before being restrained. Breaking Bad’s little desert fight reminded me perfectly of that scene in A View, and while there are plenty of cinematic fights begun over a loogie, Breaking Bad connection to Arthur Miller’s seminal work struck a chord. In fact, Breaking Bad connects to the general output of Miller’s work, marking Vince Gilligan the new, definitive author of the new American Tragedy.
Of the many themes one can draw from Miller’s plays, the most common and important one was about the power and meaning of “the name,” which, to put simply, represents an individual’s reputation. In The Crucible, John Proctor signs his name to confess to a false accusation, then goes against it when his defiled name would be put on the church for all to see. In Death of a Salesman, Willy Loman desperately tries to get his disillusioned son to pursue a real business, a legacy he can leave behind that means something, unknowingly being the cause of Biff’s unfocused drifting in the first place. He kills himself to jumpstart his son’s call to action, for god’s sake. In the final climactic scene in A View from the Bridge, Eddie bellows out to Marco to restore his name after his own act of betrayal destroys it in front of his friends, family and community. Eddie will be damned if his name is sullied, and even fights Marco to his own tragic death over this.
Sounds familiar? Did Walt read A View from the Bridge and somehow take the story to heart? “Remember my name,” “I am the one who knocks,” “Tread lightly” – these are the words of a man who knows what the name Heisenberg means, and who rushes in with a metaphorical knife to ensure there are no Marcos around to sully it. Hell, a desperate Walt shoots Mike over a series of mild insults – he’ll be damned if anyone, even someone like Mike, would question the reputation of Heisenberg.
There’s been a lot of critical speculation that Walt has always been Heisenberg, that all Breaking Bad’s early episodic claims of leaving enough money for his family when he’s gone was a lot of postulating, masking a monster beneath that’s always been there. I used to agree with this – but in pondering this argument, this connection to Miller’s American Tragedies, I now have my doubts. Tragedies are at their most poignant when the protagonist, for all intents and purposes, means well despite his horrific actions. He has a moral/ethical endgoal, but forges a decidedly immoral and unethical (or at least questionable) path to get there. If Walt was always just a burgeoning, evil monster, who just needed meth to unleash it, there would be no tragedy.
Classic Tragedy made it a point to show the protagonist realize his horrific mistake and suffer for it, the cathartic release of problematic behavior come to light – Oedipus, Agamemnon, Romeo and Juliet. American tragedy had no such reservation: protagonists stubbornly stood their ground in their decisions, and while acknowledging and stewing in own their regret, ultimately gave into their sins. John Proctor went to the gallows. Eddie, no short of irony, is stabbed to death with his own knife. Willy Loman blindly rants and raves to his own vehicular suicide. These are not people who truly realized their mistake and simply suffered for it. They went to the grave aware of their offenses but steadfast in their in defiant denial to change. Gilligan, among his showrunner entourage of Weiner, Sutter, and Chase, introduced the world to the New American Tragedy focused on men who not only thrive in their monstrous behavior but fight tooth and nail to maintain their success, giving false or little concern to those who crash and burn along side of them. It is tragic in that these people, who have “everything,” or, at the very least, are provided very obvious means to achieve anything, but opt to grab hold onto a Devil’s contract and profit within its cruel legalese.
To be clear, Walt is a New American Tragic hero, in so much that a murderous, meth-creating, drug dealing, anti-hero can be. It’s why so many people “feel” for Walt (and uncomfortably focus their rage at Skyler) – the New American Tragedy isn’t really about people that mean well. It involves people who are flawed, exaggeratedly so, in incredible, monstrous ways, yet nonetheless have a clear sense of direction. Drama has gotten as “larger than life” as comedy has, and if Community, It’s Always Sunny, and Venture Brothers go to great lengths to make its comedy stick, drama can, too. So Walter White can blow up meth gangs and beat cancer and make powerful electromagnets, bitch, and every choice is over the top and every coincidence is wildly outlandish, but the show focused primarily on one character against the world using his intelligence, spurred on by an enormous ego and an incredible amount of luck, to beat it back. Walt, like Dexter from Dexter or Tony from The Sopranos or Don from Mad Men, are awful people who decisions are made to be understood, and they are decisions that managed to work, even if the results of these decisions are pure evil. “Rooting” for these characters is meaningless in this New American Tragedy. Instead, it is about people who will go through anything to make their ideals come true and keep their legacies intact, and knowing that it will never last and will violently bring down anyone crazy enough to willingly (or unwillingly) be the vicinity. We as an audience can only watch the inevitable happen. The American Tragedy always had an air that maybe, just maybe, the protagonist can escape, or at the very lease, understand his fate. The new New American Tragedy says no – the protagonist will go down in flames, and you can only sit back and watch.
“Ozymandias” is a poem by Percy Bysshe Shelley about the inevitable fall of all leaders. Ozymandias (not coincidentally) is also the name of a brilliant “superhero” in Alan Moore’s Watchmen, a genius millionaire who “masks” his true intentions, unleashing a massive-scaled, unexplainable tragedy that destroys New York, in order to bring the world together and prevent a nuclear war. That horrific event will be made even more tragic when, in the final panel, a lazy reporter pulls out Rorschach’s notebook that reveals Ozymandias’ plan to a T. And so it goes that the episode entitled “Ozymandias” is not only about Walt’s almost-instant “fall from grace,” it’s also about how Walt’s efforts inevitably lead to their own insular tragedies – Hank’s death, Walt’s loss of money and empire, Walt Jr.’s exposure to the truth, Holly’s kidnapping, the utter destruction of the family, Walt’s phone call and “cathartic” confession to it. With two episodes left, Walt’s disappearance into hiding, after he stated he had unfinished business, is the Rorschach notebook, a quiet, unassuming reveal that will lead to even more chaos (that may involves an assault rifle).
“Granite State” built upon “Ozymandis,” tracking Walt through every trick in his arsenal to exact his revenge, and failing. He can’t get hitmen, he’s tossed out in the middle of nowhere, he can’t get Robert Forester’s “fixer” to stay two hours, even for extra money, and he can’t use the claim for family as Walt Jr. throws that excuse right into his face. The name-theme is particularly noticeable here, and how it’s reduced to nothing. Walt has to change his identity completely, reducing “Walter White” to a sad, skinny man dying in bed, and “Heisenberg” to a scared man afraid to walk eight miles in the snow. Skyler changed her last name, cutting off all ties instantly. The sympathy established for this monster is built in the utter destruction of the name (and not necessarily because he’s up again a gang of sociopaths worse then him – these are guys who pretty much did everything Walt did, just more up front and without the false sense of regret) and all it meant. It meant terrible, terrible things, but it meant SOMETHING. So as we watch Walt seethe, watching his name ripped to shreds by Gretchen and Elliott, metaphorically spat upon in every way possible (the Charlie Rose interview destroys all of them – Walter, White, Heisenberg, Grey Matter, the blue meth signature), I can see Eddie Carbone in his face, demanding Marco to give him back his name. That’s all he has, and even the most evil of men can garner sympathy with this claim.
And so it goes in “Felina,” the low-key, somewhat divisive, but perfect ending to this New American Tragedy, where Walt comes to terms with himself, and we as an audience indeed finally reach our cathartic moment. Right at the beginning, as Walt struggles to start the car in the cold, lonely, isolated world of New Hampshire, he closes his eyes and pleads to a higher power just for a chance to get home. The results are that the car keys fall right into his lap. It was in this final act – of forcing Gretchen and Elliott to create a trust fund for Walt Jr., of acknowledging his outsized ego as the real motivation for his heinous actions, of taking out the Neo-Nazi thugs and freeing Jesse from his prison – that he came to the realize who he was, what he meant, and what truly he needs to leave behind. His money is left to his family but not in his name. He watches his literal namesake, Walt Jr., enter the apartment, gone from his life forever. He takes out the Neo-Nazis with nary a mention of the Heisenberg reckoning.
I loved how utterly workman-like this episode was, Walt robotically going through his final actions without the blunder and bluster of his lies and manipulations threatening to unravel like before. It’s pure Walt, no longer masked by any false distinctions. When he and Jesse stare down each other, the latter with a gun in his hand, I’m reminded of Biff’s final confrontation with Willy, who too was close to death via a rubber hose. Walt, shot in the stomach like Eddie’s stab to the gut, spends his final moments wandering around the catalyst to his infamous name: the meth lab. There was a chance to escape his fate – staying in NH – and there are still terrible, terrible consequences – his family is ruined, Hank is dead, Jesse is scared for life – but similar Eddie, John, and Willy, Walt is a victim of his self-created tragic fate. They all confronted who they really were and what they really did, and ultimately died for it. Yet while Miller let his protagonists face their regrets and become self-deluded martyrs, Walt embraced his monstrosity and let it consume him, yet managing to focus his terror through a minor mission of redemption before succumbing to his grave.
Arthur Miller’s plays were fascinated with the perversity and corrupt fallacy of the American dream, focused not on broad ideas but on personal stories. Fathers and father-like figures, weakened and crumbled by their own personal flaws, which inadvertently are exposed, ripped apart, and inevitably lead to a vicious downfall. Miller was brutal, with implied hangings in The Crucible and brutal choreographed fights in A View, but he’s not Vince Gilligan, and it’s not 2013 TV. If he was, though, I could see Miller fitting perfectly in the Breaking Bad writing room and weaving another chapter of the downfall of Walter White. Breaking Bad brought forth a new idea of tragedy, a New American Tragedy, so expansive and far-reaching and horrific and personal. These last four episodes made it clear. Like Miller’s tragedies sought to beat back the idealized 1950s of Americana, Gilligan signature work destroyed the 2000s idea of definitive entitled Americana. I was happy to be there throughout it all.